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@@ -4,17 +4,17 @@
 received feedback from early adopters. Many thanks for the helpful and
 the constructive comments! This feedback triggered an internal
 discussion and led to revising some earlier design decisions and
-naming conventions used in the APIs to achieve better comprehension
-and orthogonality.
+naming conventions used in the APIs to achieve better
+comprehensibility and orthogonality.
 
-The new release differs in about 250 commits since the release of 
-2.0b3. The implementation is very stable and is used since 
-more than two years in production of our large scale, multi threaded 
-web environment inside NaviServer. Most of the changes happened 
-in NX and therefore on the NSF scripting level, without the need 
-to modify the NSF C layer. The implementation of XOTcl 2 
-has changed very little. The Next Scripting Framework was tested
-with Tcl 8.5.14 and Tcl 8.6.0. 
+Since the release of 2.0b3, there were more than 250 commits to our
+code repository. The implementation is very stable and has been used for
+more than two years in production of our large-scale, multi-threaded
+web environment inside NaviServer. Most of the changes happened in NX
+and, therefore, on the NSF scripting level, without the need to modify
+the NSF C layer. The implementation of XOTcl 2 has changed very
+little. The Next Scripting Framework was tested with Tcl 8.5.14 and
+Tcl 8.6.0.
 
 This beta-release is supposed to be the last release before 
 the final 2.0 is out, which should be soon.
@@ -60,11 +60,9 @@
    or query object-specific methods on objects and classes.
    The same applies for aliases, forwards, mixins, and filters.
 
-   The new convention imposes a little typing burden on the 
-   developer, but reduces the effort of a reader of a
-   program for understanding what exactly 
-      $x method FOO {args} {...}
-   means.
+   The new convention imposes a little typing burden on the developer,
+   but reduces the reading effort when trying to understand what
+   exactly $x method FOO {args} {...}  means.
 
    For convenience, we provide two packages "nx::plain-object-method"
    and "nx::class-method" to switch to the old conventions. A verbose
@@ -89,7 +87,7 @@
 
    In order to streamline the interface further, we followed the idea
    to use "... info /plural word/" to obtain a set of handles, and
-   then to make a separate call to obtain the details. Therefore, we
+   then to make a separate call to retrieve the details. Therefore, we
    now provide ...
 
      /cls/ info methods
@@ -125,8 +123,8 @@
 
 Below is a more detailed summary of the changes.
 
-The Next Scripting Framework 2.0b5 (containing NX and XOTcl 2.0)
-can be obtained from http://next-scripting.org/
+The Next Scripting Framework 2.0b5 (containing NX and XOTcl 2.0b5) can
+be obtained from http://next-scripting.org/
 
 Best regards
 - Gustaf Neumann